Hi Bailey, I love the cliffhanger at the end of the second slide - I was totally, like, on the edge of my seat as to what happened next, really great tension - all the best story writers use cliffhangers to make their story a 'page-turner', just like yours. Mrs H :)
What a great imaginative story you created! Well done Bailey :)
ReplyDeleteHi Bailey, I love the cliffhanger at the end of the second slide - I was totally, like, on the edge of my seat as to what happened next, really great tension - all the best story writers use cliffhangers to make their story a 'page-turner', just like yours. Mrs H :)
ReplyDeleteHi Bailey, I like your story, sounds like FNaF a bit. XD
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DeleteHi I like your work it looks amazing
ReplyDeleteI think you don't need to add more but maybe you could check it again